martes, 22 de septiembre de 2009
Urban life
People in Santiago are always living their lives in a fast way without see anything around them. They are so into their own lifes that don't care about the people who is around.It's not their fault because is the society who does this, everybody are always distrusting, money makes them selfish and the rutine of work makes them be stress and agressive.Usually they don't spent too much time with their family because most of people have to work too many hours affecting their relationships.
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...without SEEING around them...
ResponderEliminar...into their own LIVES...
...people who ARE around...
...IT is the society...
...money makes PEOPLE selfish (you need to say "people" because you are not making reference to "people" before, you are talking about "society")
WORK ROUTINE...
STRESSED (adjetive)
...too many hours, WHICH AFFECTS their relationships.
These are the mistakes I had to correct.