miércoles, 25 de marzo de 2009

Opinion essay

The poem is about friendship and it shows the conflicts that we sometimes have with our friends when some of them change the way that they used to be and their mind.

I agree with this because sometimes we don’t like the change that they have, maybe because we feel that the relation is different and we don’t feel comfortable staying with that person, so we start to get some troubles and finally going away of that friend, but in the end if the friend is real so the friendship will stay forever because we love each other and we learn to accept each other.

So .Why although the friends change we keep being close? I think that happens because the friendship is real and that is a gift that we have to care because many people enter in our life and sometimes we think that they are friends, but may be they aren’t. So friends come and go but the real friends always stay with us although the differences that we can have, if the friendship is real we will accept each other any way. It’s like when we have been whit a friend for many years but in a moment both change and we start to realize that we don’t have anything in common and then we just separate from the other. That happen when isn’t a true friendship but when it really is, we keep together after all.

In conclusion I believe that if we have a real friend, we shouldn’t lose him just because now we have some differences. Growing is a part of the life and to change also it is, The thing is accept this change.


3 comentarios:

  1. yeaah! your right, but...
    you have alot of grammatical mistakes with the commas and dots. =/
    the good think is that I can understand you essay :D

    regards!

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  2. you did a good job, you use a question to ask about in a real reation could finish if a person only change.

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  3. it´s a very good essay it shows something that happens very often, and most when we have 17 or 18 years because our life change :(
    You have some grammatical mistakes...but anyway...GOOD JOB MY FRIEND!!

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